Re: [tlug] A First Hello

[Mattia Dongili <malattia@example.com>]

On Thu, 16 Jul 2020 at 17:03, Andrew M <gababagonist@example.com> wrote:

That was a beautiful resume. Thoughts:

-I recommend cutting it shorter, 2 pgs max. It’s too verbose. Drop your elementary school...
-You spelled “Systems” wrong in the heading of the last section.

While at that, at the top of page 6 "Sysetm Monitor Bakcend in Shell" (two typos).

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mattia
:wq!