Re: [tlug] Re: Post my article on tlug.jp?

[Dave M G <dave@example.com>]

Jonathan, Nguyen,

Thank you for your comments.

As I mentioned to Curt, I'm not really looking for editorial suggestions 
at this point, outside of minor grammatical or factual errors.

Please keep in mind that this article is *not* being offered as a 
preview for TLUG members so that everyone can collaborate on how it is 
written. It's being made available in case anyone strongly feels that it 
is not of a category of content suitable for the TLUG web site.

Everyone is going to differ about how an article like this should be 
written, what points are important, how it should be presented.

As far as style, length, and organization are concerned, I'm basically 
okay with how it stands now. I've had enough positive feedback to be 
confident that it will reach the audience I'd like to speak to.

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Dave M G
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