Re: tlug: Draft of June 13 TLUG General Meeting Announcement

[craigoda@example.com]

From: "Jonathan Byrne" <jpmag@example.com>
Subject: Re: tlug: Draft of June 13 TLUG General Meeting Announcement
Date: Mon, 25 May 1998 21:02:37 +0900

jpmag> 
jpmag> -----Original Message-----
jpmag> From: craigoda@example.com <craigoda@example.com>
jpmag> 
jpmag> >Featuring a talks by
jpmag> >    Stephen Turnbull on Debian packaging system
jpmag> >    Scott Stone on rpm packaging system
jpmag> 
jpmag> Typo, should be either "talks" or "a talk."

Thanks.  Changed that. 


jpmag> >All Linux lovers and supporters of open source code
jpmag> >and free software are invited to attend
jpmag> 
jpmag> How about, "All Linux users or those interested in learning
jpmag> more about Linux (experienced or not), as well as other
jpmag> supporters of open source code and free software are invited
jpmag> to attend the June 13 Tokyo Linux Users Group meeting."  I

Sounds good.  Changed that to:

   All Linux users, potential users interested in learning more about Linux,  
   and supporters of open source code and free software are invited to attend
   the June 13 Tokyo Linux Users Group meeting.  Membership


jpmag> >Mr. Stone will speak on RPM packaging system, a topic he is
jpmag> intimate
jpmag> 
jpmag> Typo, needs "the" before "RPM."

Thanks.  Changed that one too.


Regards,
Craig

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Craig Oda   craigoda@example.com   http://tlug.linux.or.jp/~craigoda



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Next TLUG Meeting: 13 June Sat, Tokyo Station Yaesu gate 12:30
Featuring Stone and Turnbull on .rpm and .deb packages
Next Nomikai: (?) July, 19:30 Tengu TokyoEkiMae 03-3275-3691
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